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Tobami Tobami
  • 10-04-2020
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How would you revise a paragraph to increase the pace of the story?

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adrab62
adrab62 adrab62
  • 13-04-2020

Answer:Shorter but fluid sentences that don’t have unnecessary conjunctions.

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